Deception, the word
Reminds hurting memories
Insomnia starts
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
Deception leads to Insomnia!! So true SiS!!
ReplyDeleteDeception is something dreaded and often the soul reason of someone staying alone whole life.
ReplyDeleteMisrepresentation or a misleading falsehood can really be upsetting causing great sleep disturbances. You thought out well.
ReplyDeleteGreat capture of your subject in such a short span, amazing!
ReplyDeleteSIS! You made me wordless coz I've felt the pain after a deception...
ReplyDeleteThis is too good, you brought both the prompts together and created a splendid haiku.
ReplyDeletekudos!
trisha
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smart one.
ReplyDeleteneat one....captures the essence of both deception and insomnia.
ReplyDeletebrilliant in its simplicity--I really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteworst kind of insomnia it is...well done SiS
ReplyDeletenot only insomnia it leads to a lot of other bad things.. the mind set and the thoughts change ...
ReplyDeleteDeception is something that can convert a human into a ANIMAL in a second ...
Bikram's
Its not mere insomnia but it evades the whole of you and crumples you at times... A good read !
ReplyDeleteTake Care,
Fatima
SiS.. This is so true.. I have had such sleepless nights which have woken me up..
ReplyDeleteSo true - beautifully said.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku, hope you enjoyed it this week, I had fun making up my one.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely week,
Jade
nothing hurts more than deception of a loved one.
ReplyDeletetrisha
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/01/14/free-soul-14th-january-2011/
Your haiku combined with the picture are so sad!
ReplyDeleteMmmm, very very true. Well done!
ReplyDelete:-) ...
ReplyDeletelaconic deapths
what do they call it?
oh, yes- Art!
Loved it!
Keep writing!
The fact!..nice haiku sis
ReplyDeleteCan you join us in?
ReplyDeletehttp://umaspoembook.blogspot.com/2011/01/experimenting-with-poetry-forms_16.html
Every week,I write new prompts on poetry form..hope to see you there sis!
Ah, very true. Sleep is often the first thing that suffers with deception. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteTrue! Loved the image!
ReplyDeleteI have been deceived so many times...
ReplyDeleteand as a result experienced insomnia everytime...
very well written :)
So true, SiS... and sometimes, even the converse may be true..
ReplyDeleteAll that sleeplessness causes deceptive images to form in the head :)
A neat haiku, my friend..
Oh bless that is so touching. Sorry I missed this on Weds, I had a bad back :O)
ReplyDelete@ Rumya
ReplyDeleteYes it Rumya.. True for sure.. Thanks for reading..
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@ Deepika
ReplyDeleteIt is of course dreaded and it causes sleep deprivation.. Thanks much deepika for reading..
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@ Nanka
ReplyDeleteOf course it will be Nanka.. Thanks a ton for your thoughts..
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@ Thoughts Not Lost
ReplyDeleteThanks a million for the words of encouragement.. Happy man..
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@ RAHUL: The Weakest Point is Love
ReplyDeleteRahul, you have made me wordless with your words and deception is such a poison to consume. Stay away from it..
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@ Trisha
ReplyDeleteThanks much for the sweet words.. Glad to know that Trisha.. You are so sweet..
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteThanks Ji, HAppy man you know..
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@ pr910
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that and happy to have you here pr910
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@ spiritsoflena
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thanks much for enjoying as much as I did when penning it down..
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@ Tweety
ReplyDeleteYes, it is worst.. Thanks Tweety..
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@ Bikramjit
ReplyDelete1000% agreed to you Bikram..
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@ Fatima
ReplyDeleteyes it is, thanks for reading..
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@ Rameshji
ReplyDeleteOf course it is, and I have spent many such night Ji.. Thanks much for reading..
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@ Margo Benson
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thanks much for the encouraging words.. Pleasure to have you here..
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@ JadeLD
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it JadeLD.. Thanks much and I enjoyed.. Hope the same from you.. Keep smiling..
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@ Trisha
ReplyDeleteYes Trisha, nothing hurts as much as Deception does..
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@ Becca
ReplyDeleteThanks much and it is my pleasure to have you here..
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@ The Words Crafter
ReplyDeleteYeah it is.. Thanks much for reading...
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@ Matangi Mawley
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it.. Thanks much for the sweet words..
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@ uma.a
ReplyDeleteof course it is, thanks uma..
Thanks for the invite, it is my pleasure to join you..
PS: It will be good If we know the forms a week ahead to be prepared..
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@ Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?
ReplyDeletePleasure is mine, thanks much Jenn..
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@ scentofmyheart
ReplyDeleteof course it is.. Thanks much..
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@ Sumit Sarkar
ReplyDeleteoh is it Sumit.. Don't take those in to hearts, live your life happily...
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@ Kavita
ReplyDeleteyeah it is Kavi, happy to have you here.. and of course i too have many... today is one such day..
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@ Madeleine
ReplyDeleteThanks for this and Glad to know that.. Thanks much..
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