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Ashik – the man who plays with time, Research Head – Time Institute, Stanford was preparing for his new Mission – “Is there an End to the World?” His God Father & Research Head Mr. Abdul was assisting him in his Time Travel. Almost all preliminary steps were completed in their Time Machine (MISIT).
As researches say, WORLD HAS AN END; they wanted to prove it wrong. So Ashik started his 3rd Time Travel of his life time on 1st Jan 2011. Everything was ready for him to start, his travel date was set to 01-01-2013 and his God Father initiated his start. MISIT started to rotate & within seconds it disappeared, he was the happiest man in the planet as he was going to prove everyone that WORLD HAD NO END.
But he was surprised at the things that happened,
1st – Rotation speed of the machine was unpredictable.
2nd – Oxygen was 100% pure
3rd – Heart Beat frequency was more than normal, 10 Hertz.
4th - Magnetic Compass was not working
Ashik: Oh my God, what’s happening? Why this shit? I never faced these kind of problems, but?
But in no time, he fell semiconscious; he could feel what was happening over there but, not clearly.
Ashik: Even in my first travel, I felt good, I didn't go semiconscious & I still remember my time travel to 28th March 1947 where I met our ‘Mahatma’ Gandhi, Jawaharlal Nehru & all our Freedom fighters, even though I couldn’t mark my name in history, I was happy for the above reasons, I stayed there till 16th August 1947, I enjoyed the Independence with all those gems but my only guilty feel was that I was not there on January 30th 1948, if I were then I would have saved our Mahatma by all means. But none of the people in the present day's world believed my TRAVEL or those photo copies, probably they considered me and my God Father as Fools or 2 Idiots.
My Second Travel was very exciting, as I went to 700 B.C & should consider myself as one of the evidences of our epic ‘Mahabharata’. Suppose I have to suggest anyone a role model then I would suggest KARNAN – the man with golden arms who always donates, probably if I were been God then I would have given the throne to KARNAN and made him as Maharaja but I couldn’t. This time, the people advise me to consider a psychiatrist. PEOPLE NEVER BELIEVE INTELLIGENTS OR IN-BORN TALENTS. IF YOU HAVE MONEY THEN YOU ARE WINNER, IF YOU DON'T THEN YOU ARE LOSER.
What a poor life am I living, at least this time I have to prove them I am a genius. Will I?
Days rolled on in his instincts and MISIT reached a mountain top & he became conscious after an hour or so. He had no energy to come out of MISIT but somehow he did and to his surprise he could find only water all over the earth except the place where he stood. He couldn’t believe so went inside the MISIT to check the date and it showed 13-02-0000, “Oh my God! Unbelievable!!!” and took his SONY Handy Cam, started shooting the entire view but he hunted for at least one living creature.
On the next day he heard a sweet voice, hope everyone knows it should be a girl’s voice. “Hi, this is Andrea”, only one survivor from the WORLD ZONE Submarine.
Ashik: Hi, this is Ashik, May I know how many travelled with you?
Andrea: Many thousands.
Ashik: Hmmm... That’s good, where are they?
Andrea: (pointing her hands up) “Heaven”
Ashik: Oh God, I feel sorry.
Andrea: I travelled in a different wing where there were only animals. Rest of the wings dashed and sank into the sea
Ashik: According to my knowledge this place should be CAPE OF GOOD HOPE, placed almost several thousand feet above the sea level. And you know today’s date is 14-FEB-0000
Andrea: Hmmm... Great, I have found a human being after 45 days i.e. Valentine’s Day (and hugged him).
Ashik said to himself, “We are the next Adam & Eve” and smiled because he didn't want to prove himself to rest of the World. He rated that this was his best TIME TRAVEL
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This was a good and casual read, I enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteI also feel that you could have been more creative and innovative with the story. Nevertheless, all the best for BATOM-8!
Interesting thoughts! Interesting writing!
ReplyDeleteall the luck :)
was an interesting read! :) all the best!
ReplyDeleteAaaila...:p adam and eve met on v-day....:D ha ha...good imagination....:D
ReplyDeleteInteresting. Nice read. All the best for BATOM!
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ReplyDelete"Ashik:nd you know today’s date is 14-FEB-0000
Andrea: Hmmm... Great, I have found a human being after 45 days i.e. Valentine’s Day (and hugged him)."
interesting piece altogether!
Romance....Clubbed with Sci fi ...
ReplyDelete:)....Romantic attempt.:)
Hahaha.. :D Wonderful imagination, must say. Hilarious at times. Thoroughly enjoyed. :)
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"Adam and eve" :P How interesting!
ReplyDeleteI liked the hilarious ending. :)
All the best for Blog-a-ton 8. :)
the end is scintillating and so is the imagination and the execution
ReplyDeletenice one :)
Romance + sci-fi = toooo good :) Enjoyed reading it! :)
ReplyDeleteReally original. Beautiful how you have brought out the concept that time is circular. Conceptually brilliant and nice the way you have tied up genesis, the 2012 myth and Valentine's day. 'Amazing' is the only word I have.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for your first comment in my blog.. and also for your wishes..
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Thanks for your appreciation and am very Glad, you liked it a lot :-)
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Hi Saravana,
ReplyDeletegood linking but i expected more....
thought that you would be putting more of fiction ... somehow it came to a rapid end...
kya kare ...dil maange more !
Romantic thoughts wrapped in Sci-fi...great imagination...
ReplyDeleteall the best for BAT 8
Very interesting & romantic thought indeed.
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Saras
What a twist at the end!!! Amazing...
ReplyDeleteGood punches and the end was very good :)
ReplyDeletenice writing... Tho the writing about saving gandhi was unnecessary...
ReplyDeleteNot many bloggers are pro Gandhi you see ;-)
@raji
ReplyDeleteI am very happy that you like it & expected more.
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Thanks :-)
@Saurabh
Thanks for your wishes, few thoughts abt your opinion - Gandhiji is our Mahatma and anyone will like to save him as it would have reflected a lot in us.
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M