when our eyes met, the
world froze, heart flied, sweetest
ninety seconds
words spoken from heart
through eyes, makes life meaningful,
Someone is Special
special person, she
ignites my muse to write, nah!
to romance with pen
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012
Day 10 – February 10th – Theme:
Write a Haiku describing about a Special day in your life...
Day 10 – February 10th – Theme:
Write a Haiku describing about a Special day in your life...
Life is made easy for you, Day 10 Code:
Here you go my dear twitter users...
! おはよう ございます 友人 ! - ARIGATO GOZAIMASU - GOOD MORNING
Are you ready for The Haiku Challenge 2012? The prompts are out, rules are set, for more details visit HERE, and the challenge enters Day 10 with this post.. The challenge begins at 12 AM or 00:00 IST and goes on until GMT-08:30AM (i.e., the next day 02:00 PM or 14:00 IST), so all the time zones can participate in this challenge,and three cheers to all the challengers! Write a Haiku describing about a Special day in your life and share your Haiku Post Direct Link here in the linky tool or in comment section of this post, if Linky tool is not available. You can also tweet your Haiku as | Haiku | #FMHCD10 @FewMiles
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PS: Please do not forget to include the Day 10 code provided with this post
Happy Haiku Challenge to you all! The Game is oN...!!!!!!!!!
As most of you know my sweet journey started with the poem, “First Waters”, and later (LEO - 100) & (Jingle - 200), (Simran Kaur, Geeta Singh and Mohini Purnaik - 250) honoured me with their guest post and I heartily thank them for sharing their words :-)
Every time I used to invite my fellow writers to write a guest post but this time I did not, instead I requested one of my granny to write few words for me in general and the result is here.
In Hindi...
दोहा -
1. मन का तोसा गहन है इतना धन से भरण न पाई,
व तो तभी भरिये मानस ज्ञान जो ह्रदय समाई
2. मोह की मीठी चाश में तिखा न देख दिखाई
मोह की आस ब्रिथा जब होगी तब आएगी रुलाई
3. सुख ही कारण दुःख उपजत है
ये तत गुढ है आजानी
जो बोवत वाही हो कहावत यह तन खेत की नीयायी
In English...
Doha -
1. The satisfaction of mind cannot be ample by the money but it can be procured with the light of knowledge in heart and mind.
2. When we get so much of love, we are at the top of the world and get madly blind within its sweetness! But when we realize that there is no one to love, we mourn over it!
3. It's only our hunger or eagerness to grab the happiness, the main reason behind our pain and cries... This truth is totally unknown! The one who sows this excitement within is prone to it's loss... This is all the reality..
Thanks for the light grandma, “Swarn Kaur”, Grandma of Simran Kaur ~ My Friendship.
Wish - I wish to write more and more poems as well as creative fictions with proper grammar (trying to) from my heart, hopefully! Also to publish my novel soon.. Let’s see... Fingers crossed... What else??? Yeah... Party time.........
Here we go.. Enjoy the Champagne... Join the party... Shower your blessings as comments or share the word to the world to enjoy the words..
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
A beautiful moment beautifully described! Love the expression "the world froze".
ReplyDeleteday 10 already wow.
ReplyDeleteamazing .
shared one.
Beautiful poem...thanks for the prompt..I need to get busy :)
ReplyDeleteMy dear friend Saravana,
ReplyDeleteYou have indeed reached a milestone. Congratulations on your 300th post & a mighty fine one at that!
I can see where your creativity comes from too...nice words from you and your Grandma.
Wishing you much success for many years to come. Keep on romancing us with your pen, my friend!
When you get a chance, please come to my blog. I have a special gift for you.
Award Time...Sharing The Love Again!
And you do romance with the pen very well:)
ReplyDeleteA sweet, romantic haiku! Very nice.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your 300th post. You've come a long way. May your wish to publish your novel come true very, very soon. You must be super excited.
Love reading "First Waters." Congratulations once again!
Lovely...So beautiful :)
ReplyDeletePhew! Congrats!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of the heart speaking through the eyes.
and that thought - the world froze, is loaded!!!
Love can turn our world upside down!
ReplyDeleteSweet and romantic haiku!
ReplyDeleteAwesome haiku my friend! And today was also my 300 post! Congrats and many cheers to us both!!!! Lol
ReplyDeleteWow that's so romantic! :)
ReplyDeleteAnd hearty congratulations on your 300th post! :D
Congratulations, Saravana. What a wonderful milestone! 300 posts is awesome!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations!!!
ReplyDeleteWow! 300 posts! You rocks really!
So happy for your great achievement and also that you added Grand ma's lines in this memorable post!
:)
May you get your novel publish soon :)
Best wishes!!
And yes..loved your haiku ..
@ Gemma Wiseman
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ Life is that easy
ReplyDeleteGlad to read your share.. thanks :-)
Someone is Special
@ Susie Clevenger
ReplyDeleteEnjoy Susie.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ Andy
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Andy.. I am happy.. Flying man..
Someone is Special
CONGRATULATIONS, SiS! and i wish you good fortune in achieving your goals.
ReplyDeleteyour haiku are beautiful ~ there is something about seeing love in another's eyes which is so magical... so meaningful.
@ myheartslovesongs
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Dani.. Happy to read your encouraging words..
Someone is Special