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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
Found your blog in Google last month from that day became fan of this ROMANTIC VERSER. Came here to read your updates. But Now confusing me with SiS being a ghost and mystery writer?
ReplyDeleteIs SiS and Siddesh are different i thought they are one and the same.
Is this really happened? Will this mystery continue? I want this to continue and wanna know about this.
Blog-a-ton I want to explore this soon. Wonderful topics given here. Is winners are announced? If so where and whom? Wanna know about this. Wish you win and your mysterious wish satisfies for the ghost.
PS: Is Isha is your wife name? Sweet madness, Celebrations and this time Isha and Siddehsh little mushy always. The way you blend romance with the thoughts you pen down is unbelievable. romance with mystery at its best.
Wish you win this contest.
n here we hav ghosts,a mystery in demselves, or was it god?? linkin d end to blog-a-ton was a gud move...
ReplyDeleteInteresting mystery story here SiS!
ReplyDeleteIsha again? a romantic-horror flick this time from you!
Romantic in a sense that it seems you can't get enough of Isha and the horror, that poem in the pc screen "Under the Sun of a Moonless Night"! Intriguing poem, but I could hardly make out the verses, a li'l bit blurred which make the poem hard to read!
But I know it is a beautiful poem written by Someone Is Special!
Good luck Sis! And have a great weekend with your Isha....:D
@ bala
ReplyDeleteGlad you found my via Google.. I saw your comments even in my early post, ROMANTIC VERSER - man thanks for the title, in future I will use it in my Introduction, is that fine for you?
Coming to Mystery, Is Siddesh and Somone is Special are different?" It is a mystery wait until that mystery get solved Real? Stay tuned to know it, yeah BLOG-A-TON announce winners based on votes and thanks for wishes.
--Someone is Special--
@ adharshs
ReplyDeleteGhosts or God? Nice Mystery right? Stay Tuned here to unfold the mystery
PS: It may take months to unfold this.
--Someone is Special--
@ Amity
ReplyDeleteJust read yours and came back here. It was a nice mystery..
Of course Isha, romantic and horror - thanks for that. I hope you liked it..
Regarding the image, it has got broken links and now it is working fine, click on the image to enlarge it and read. Sorry for the trouble..
Thanks for the wishes Amity and wish you a very happy weekend with your kids..
--Someone is Special--
LOL, that was creative blending romance with ghost mystery and ending it with BAT itself.
ReplyDeleteI forget the name of the movie but theres a documentary where a couple has actually trained a cam on their bedroom door after doubting the presence of a ghost between them at their aptmnt.
Your story was not as scary and spooky but did remind me of it!
After all a writer ghost cant be much of a harm can it??? LOL
good job SIS! And ATB for BAT 12
PS: what is Koibitou?????
@ Vibhuti B
ReplyDeleteGlad to have you here and happy to hear those words from you Vibz...
Oh is it? I never know that.. :-(
Mine is not about scary but about the mystery of the mystery writer who wants to convey his/her words to this world. What words was that and Why?.. He/she is a God or a Ghost and why the mystery writer choose Siddesh and Isha this is all about the Mystery here.. Can someone answer ?
PS: KOIBIOTOU - SWEETHEART (JAPANES WORD)
--Someone is Special--
Thanks for accepting the title. Glad to know that they announce winner based on votes. I love to vote for you then. I had subscribed to feeds to stay updated. love, bala.
ReplyDeleteLOL, that was the funniest mystery story I ever read. Thank God the ghost did not harm Sid or Isha and was friendly and even helpful to write a BAT post. Marshal's BAT seems to be getting popular in the netherworld too. LOL :D
ReplyDeleteAll the Best for BAT 17 and you never fail to think out-of-the-box.
If you want peace from the ghost...then I would suggest...that you buy a lappy or notebook for him...his personal one to pen down ghostly thoughts...LOL :D
@ bala
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that but PS, BAT doesn't allow non-participants to vote. Nevertheless thanks for all the love.
--Someone is Special--
@ Rumya
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the LOl.. yeah yeah that is a better idea you know for solving the mystery in a easier way.. Happy to read your wonderful comments.. Thanks Rumya.......
--Someone is Special--
Hmm..Nice way of putting forth the mystery..and found the poem really different..was my first visit..hope to bang upon each time you put something new :)
ReplyDelete@ Alcina
ReplyDeleteWelcome abroad Alcina.. I hope you enjoyed the Mystery and by the way did you find the answer for the mystery?
"Keep smiling as this Mystery Writer as a Mystery Forever" any clue?
--Someone is Special--
so the "someone" in "someone is special" is a ghost? jk... :) ;)
ReplyDeleteI loved it..especially the ending...
nd thanx for dropping by and leaving ur footprint.. ;)
@ Anoop
ReplyDelete"someone" is a ghost? mystery? Try to solve it.. Glad to know that.. Thanks to you too..
--Someone is Special--
SIS,
ReplyDeleteYou have written a short novel bud :)
Mystery and romance, amazing the way you come up with plots like this.
good luck with the contest Buddy
Sweet mystery...
ReplyDeleteJust when you feel what could be the missing element in something , you reach a perfect answer which in this case was this post, nothing missing at all. It grips you and at the same time leaves you yearning for more. And then linking it to BAT hmmmm quite an idea man.
ReplyDeleteAll the best and thanks for dropping by
hey thnx 4 reading my post. dts a nice 1 u've got here.
ReplyDeleteGoodluck!
@ Md. Muddassir Shah
ReplyDeleteMuddassir thanks for the wonderful encouraging words and the constant support. Thank you so much for all the smiles..
Hoping to get the same support from you.. Thanks for the wishes and wish you the same..
--Someone is Special--
@ Beyond Horizon
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much..
--Someone is Special--
@ MAVERIC
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that MAVERIC.. Thank you so much for the encouraging words and also for the wishes..
--Someone is Special--
Oh this is bad.. Anyways I love reading your wonderful romantic works..
ReplyDelete@ m7
ReplyDeleteThanks for the smiles and wishes..
--Someone is Special--
@ bala
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thanks..
--Someone is Special--
I was really waiting to see how the story would end and it ended in a way I didn't expect.. And the last paragraph confused me a bit.. Overall, a different post
ReplyDeleteA new concept !
ReplyDeleteI would suggest a sequel.
All the best for BAT !!
@ Srikanth
ReplyDeleteHmm confused in last para? that is what I want.. mystery lies there.. Glad to know that it is an unexpected ending..
--Someone is Special--
@ Enchanta
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the smiles and wishes.. Glad to have you here..
--Someone is Special--
Funny mystery. All the best.
ReplyDeleteii desu!
Like like like :) , Thanks for landing on my blog , had u not being there I wouldnt have come here due to work load. Please give this to sm reality horror show :) with just a lil twist. they will love to picture it :).
ReplyDeleteInteresting.... a very unique take on the topic and very well written.
ReplyDelete@ Maddie
ReplyDeleteThanks for the wishes and wish you the same..
--Someone is Special--
@ Saket Dabi
ReplyDeleteWow This was one of the most wonderful completment I have ever got. Thanks Saket for landing on my blog.. Welcome..
--Someone is Special--
@ Vikram Pyati
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it interesting.. Thank you..
--Someone is Special--
Hey SiS!
ReplyDeleteYou redefined GHOST WRITING and how!! Ooooo!I wonder how you came up with this concept of weaving all human emotions in one post where undoubtedly love has an upper hand over fear! :D
Marhsal will be a HAPPY MAN if he reads this and might even be flattered about GHOST WRITING for BAT(literally!) :)
You definitely came up with something that kept me entertained! Good luck! Cheers! :D
You mean ghost writing for BAT? I guess it is right in a way..:-) at least for me :-)
ReplyDelete@ Raksha Raman
ReplyDeleteWell Raksha, whenever you visit my space you make me fly to cloud 9 with your wonderful encouraging words.. You totaly felt what I penned down there.. and always love has an upper hand over fear.. I hope Marshy is happy... Thanks for all the cheers..
--Someone is Special--
@ aativa
ReplyDeleteYeah it may be.. Thanks aativas for the wonderful words of encouragement here..
--Someone is Special--
nice to see you are evolving as a writer...grt one...keep it up dude....
ReplyDeleteI am glad to find your blog on Google. I want to read more of your works. I will read and post comments. love, bala.
ReplyDeleteHey!
ReplyDeleteTo begin, let me shake hands with you on our love for Sach. I love him like mad, too.
Now, talking about your post, following is what I'd like to say:
1. Really like your style of writing - it is simple and easy to understand. Your writing gives very 'friendly' vibes.
2. I hate you for the blogaton ending you gave to it. I feel you had a great idea at your hand... and you had done pretty well to develop it.. till you decided to divert in the end. I wish you had a more serious thing to it.
3. The images you've got for the ghost work aren't very clear. Need improvement.
4. Your typical IT professional stuff is highly relate-able... and makes me feel connected :)
Ummm.. that's all I can think of. But wait, one question -
Did you write the post? or you had a ghost writer for it? :)
@ Sourav
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that from you and thanks for the wonderful sweet mail that you sent me..
"Hi Saravana,
This is very good, in fact better than your other blog posts. I must tell you that I am not flattering you, when I say that you are evolving as a writer. I am particularly impressed with many paragraphs from mystery like this one for example
“The worst job on this earth is to be an IT professional, the modern day saints who gave up their life, family and everything just for the sake of the dreadful word: deadline. After three days of continuous hectic work, I went back home to spend time with her. “Tik… tik...” I knocked the door at eleven in the night. She opened the door, “So do you remember that you have a wife?” She frowned, “Hey angel… This is not my mistake,” I tried to score husband points with the word angel. I made her cool down, ate and slept.”
Keep it up man. U are gifted and am sure your perseverance will pay off.
Thanks and Regards,
Sourav "
You made me fly man.. thanks..
--Someone is Special--
@ bala
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that you want to read more of my works and also thanks for the wonderful comments there.. Just read all those and flying now in sky.......
--Someone is Special--
@ Kshitij
ReplyDeleteThanks for the shake hand man.. I am a mad fan of The God of Cricket, Sachin..
Coming to the post, sorry for disaapointing you with that BAT ending.. But I felt that would give more and more reality to it..
Happy to know that you liked my style of writing.. and thanks for understanding about IT field..
Sure will check on image from next time..
Yes you came to the point.. I wrote this post, but is it a Ghost or a God referred here in the image, Mystery remains forever.. Happy for that..
--Someone is Special--
Good God, man... at some points there, you totally creeped me out!!
ReplyDeleteTurned out to harmless eventually... phhheeewww... thank goodness! :)
Well writ, my friend..
An entirely new concept with a combo presentation. Very interesting and unusual read. Enjoyed a lot. All the best.
ReplyDelete@ Kavita
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that i totally creeped at some points.. thank you so much for the wonderful words of encouragement..
--Someone is Special--
@ Cherry Blossom
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that cherry.. Thanks for the encouraging words..
--Someone is Special--
WOW! a nice take on the topic and that too in your unique style of writing.You have created mystery through romance ....great!Poem indeed looks like a winning poem.
ReplyDeleteall the best for BAT.
wow! What a mystery. Nice one.... I think this post will win the contest.
ReplyDeleteDo stop by, Image Funia
where u can find nice and unique wallpapers
@ Pratibha The Talent
ReplyDeleteYou made me fly prathiba with your sweet words of encouragement.. Thank you so much and happy to know that..
Thanks..
--Someone is Special--
@ HotBoyzz
ReplyDeleteYou made me fly to cloud 9 HotBoyzz.. Thanks a ton for this.. Sure will stop by your soon..
--Someone is Special--
Very interesting concept. Fresh idea. Would certainly be quite a prophecy if you ended up winning the BAT! :D
ReplyDeleteAll the best.
@ D2
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that D2.. Thanks for the sweet words. Happy to have you here..
--Someone is Special--
oho...thats wonderfully written..!!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful one dear...you are definitely the someone special at BAT..!!!
All the best for BAT dear..!!!
Yamini Meduri - The Mystery
Yours
Yamini Meduri
Loved the way mystery blended with sweet nothings!! All the best for BAT 17. I see strong chances with so much comments:)
ReplyDeleteGood one keep up the mystery...till it unfolds
ReplyDelete@ Yamini Meduri
ReplyDeleteYou made me fly to cloud 9 dear.. Glad you felt the beauty of it and happy to read your wonderful comment..
Happy Man, if I become that someone special at BAT..
--Someone is Special--
@ Venky
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that Venky from you.. Happy to know that Venky.. Lets see if that happens..
--Someone is Special--
@ Raj
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that Raj.. Thank you so much and happy man after reading your wonderful comments..
--Someone is Special--
Hey SiS,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way U narrated the story. Totally interesting.
"The worst job on this earth is to be an IT professional, the modern day saints who gave up their life, family and everything just for the sake of the dreadful word: deadline"
There is not better way to describe an IT guy.
Be careful while resizing/ transforming the pictures you use. The words are not clear, not even when enlarged.
I poem was awesome, but I didnt like the for Blogaton to win shit there.
It would be better if the ghost writes for its cause (let's say his love) and Sid posts it in blog-a-ton under Mystery in his own life.
BTW Job well done, Rock on.....
@ Maniac
ReplyDeleteHey SiS, I liked the way U narrated the story. Totally interesting. "The worst job on this earth is to
be an IT professional, the modern day saints who gave up their life, family and everything just for the
sake of the dreadful word: deadline" There is not better way to describe an IT guy.
I am super glad that you like my style and narration.. and an IT guy knows how to describe a IT
professsional.. Hmm thanks for your encouraging words.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
Hey SIS... Once again I was looking for some refreshment and suddenly thought came, why don't I just walk a "Few Miles" with your pen... and once again you served the dish for my soul... Loved this story... Always love to read your stories... Amazingly narrated and very sweetly protraited... God Bless you Special... :)
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