The bridge is not so long
I can come to you along
The cold is killing you and me
I can give you, myself, and me
The hurting reasons make me wait
I still love you with all my heart
The sweet memories never fade away
I wish eternal love and peace in our way.
cute tunes of nature
sweetness of relationship
Perfect Poet for this
Republished as a part of
Thursday Poets Rally, Week 39
:-) Thanks for the sweet hearts who nominated me for Perfect Poet Award.. I nominate Kavita and fiveloaf :-)
Earlier published as a part of One Shot Wednesday & Flash 55
I have been nominated as Perfect Poet for my Work, "CUTE TUNES OF NATURE". I accept it with this Haiku...
I can come to you along
The cold is killing you and me
I can give you, myself, and me
The hurting reasons make me wait
I still love you with all my heart
The sweet memories never fade away
I wish eternal love and peace in our way.
cute tunes of nature
sweetness of relationship
Perfect Poet for this
Republished as a part of
Thursday Poets Rally, Week 39
:-) Thanks for the sweet hearts who nominated me for Perfect Poet Award.. I nominate Kavita and fiveloaf :-)
Earlier published as a part of One Shot Wednesday & Flash 55
I have been nominated as Perfect Poet for my Work, "CUTE TUNES OF NATURE". I accept it with this Haiku...
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Beautifully Written Dear. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much Zainab for those beautiful words.. You made my day.....
ReplyDelete--Someone Is Special--
i can feel the torn emotions between wanting and letting go...wishing them the best though hoping perhaps it was you...nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteBridges are so much shorter when two people crossing them meet in the middle. Nice One Shot.
ReplyDeleteLove, and lost love, and love always remembered. Memory is the cridge. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteSO apecial, so sweet so lovingly said
ReplyDelete;)
The bridge between the love once shared and the love always remembered. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. The pic is amazing too.
ReplyDeleteThe bridge is a good symbol for remembrances, and in this case seems to remind of pain. A nice One Shot!
ReplyDelete@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Brain for those wonderful wishes and words... Happy One Shot!
--Someone Is Special--
@ Eric Alder
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for those wonderful encouraging words... Happy One Shot...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Glynn
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Glynn......
--Someone Is Special--
@ Dulce
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for those lovely words... Indeed Special...
--Someone Is Special--
@ TALON
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for those lovely encouraging words TALON...
--Someone Is Special--
@ KB
ReplyDeleteWelcome back!
Thank you so much for those lovely words...
--Someone Is Special--
@ dustus
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much... Happy One Shot!!!
--Someone Is Special--
a lovely poem...and yes the bridge is a great metaphor...do we cross or do we stay where we are...nicley said..cheers pete
ReplyDeleteI wish eternal peace and love in all hearts too!
ReplyDeleteNicely played, Someone...
Felt it!!
Sometimes, those bridges just ceases to exist... and that's the day of bliss!
This one Kicked Ass as well!
ReplyDeleteThanks again...G
PS. Cheer Up!
@ Pete Marshall
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those sweet encouraging words! !
Happy One Shot!
--Someone Is Special--
@ kavisionz
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those beautiful encouraging words! !
Happy One Shot!
--Someone Is Special--
@ G-Man
ReplyDeleteThank you so much G-Man...
--Someone Is Special--
hey i read this one already...smiles. still a nice response and 55...
ReplyDelete@ Brain Miller
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Brain, once again...
--Someone Is Special--
Oh I get a two for one
ReplyDeletethis one represents so many levels of love. What a fine poem
Glad you shared with One shot and g's 55
Moon smiles
@ Moon
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.. I am very happy to hear those from you...
--Someone Is Special--
This is all so very special!! Wow...it took my breath away. Life deals with so many bridges...we choose to cross over or stay on one side...this was excellent.
ReplyDeleteHere's Mine. Yes, I finally did one...long time no see!!!
Have a super weekend.
@ HOOTIN' ANNI
ReplyDeleteWelcome Back!
Thank you so much for those lovely beautiful words..
Do keep coming..
--Someone Is Special--
This is beautiful my friend. Well done :) Have a great weekend :)
ReplyDelete@ Thom
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so so much...
--Someone Is Special--
Ok, so there is hope for then :D
ReplyDeletewonderfully played 55.
ReplyDeleteyou expressed your sentiments very nicely!
@ Mona
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ji...
--Someone Is Special--
all out for love! fantastic! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking this to poets rally.
ReplyDeletesweet sentiments.
cheers.
A simple write about love... The expression on how one believes and holds on Love dearly..
ReplyDeleteYou are 3rd on my list and yeah, I am close to tears, maybe because I am struggling to keep the Love in me alive..
Anyway, here is mine.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpmar101.html
I am glad I drop by and thanks for you gentle sharing..
so much said in the space, the unsaid.
ReplyDeleteBridges are meant to be, for lovers to cross together into the future. Bridges are always connecting, keeping love above the waters, letting love cross and return. A beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteso so so beautiful SiS!!! luv it
ReplyDeletenice poem. its short and simple but it conveyed the message that you are wishing to deliver.
ReplyDeletebest line for me:
"The cold is killing you and me
I can give you, myself and me"
you left a sigh in my heart...
ReplyDeleteyour words was so beautiful, i was on the edge hoping to hear more...
ReplyDeletehere is my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/03/your-smile.html
very generous in your last line..a great write my friend.. my wk 39 is here.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/17/regret/
ReplyDeleteSo very special.......
ReplyDeleteMay you have that eternal love on your way. Lovely poem, sweet, heartfelt! The award brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThis reads like the beginning of a song... sweet! :)
ReplyDeleteHappy rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
I love the romance hidden behind the lines. But I do wonder sometimes how hard/easy it is to keep the true love burning strong against time....
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem !! Happy rally !!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the acceptance and nominations...
ReplyDeletewell done.
feel free to write a new one and link in.
not officially doing so, but you can do it for some rare occasion.
"The hurting reasons make me wait / I still love you with all my heart"
ReplyDeleteI love the lack of rhyme here, it really emphasizes the point. Also, the use of heart, which is so close to hate which would rhyme drives it home even more. Beautifully crafted.
very romantic, SiS..
ReplyDeleteExcellent words sis
ReplyDeleteeautifully expressed
ReplyDeleteGreat write - if only we could only remember with fondness some of our past!
ReplyDeleteSuch well expressed emotions in this. I hope you find the eternal peace and love you are seeking.
ReplyDeleteI love how powerful your words are and how strong love can be despite adversity.
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece. True love is a gift!
ReplyDeleteHere;s my rally entry- http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/03/05/341/
Ah the essence of love and trueness in the lines ! :) They are simple-y beautiful SiS .. The words convey so many feelings and emotions , I am sure every heart , in love will be able to understand and most of us , do go through this .. Wishing for your eternal love to stay forever ! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for such sweet love poem
ReplyDeleteNice one buddy...
ReplyDeleteyour poem paints a beautiful picture of love:-)
ReplyDeleteshort and sweet :)
ReplyDelete@ bendedspoon
ReplyDeleteall out for love! fantastic! :)
Thanks a lot...
Someone is Special
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking this to poets rally.
sweet sentiments.
cheers.
SmileS.. :-)
Someone is Special
@ Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike)
ReplyDeleteA simple write about love... The expression on how one believes and holds on Love dearly..
You are 3rd on my list and yeah, I am close to tears, maybe because I am struggling to keep the Love in me alive..
Anyway, here is mine.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpmar101.html
I am glad I drop by and thanks for you gentle sharing..
Krislin, Thanks a lot for your sweeet words...
Someone is Special
@ Jillian
ReplyDeleteso much said in the space, the unsaid.
of course, that's the power of words.. Thanks...
Someone is Special
@ dan roberson
ReplyDeleteBridges are meant to be, for lovers to cross together into the future. Bridges are always connecting, keeping love above the waters, letting love cross and return. A beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much dan.. Happy to have you here... SmileS..
Someone is Special
@ Dishilicious
ReplyDeleteso so so beautiful SiS!!! luv it
Thanks again Dishi....... Happy Man.......
Someone is Special
@ cybermushroom
ReplyDeletenice poem. its short and simple but it conveyed the message that you are wishing to deliver.
best line for me:
"The cold is killing you and me
I can give you, myself and me"
Thank you thank you thank you..... Happy...
Someone is Special
@ sam
ReplyDeleteyou left a sigh in my heart...
Glad I did.. Happy!!!
Someone is Special
@ Chim's World of Literature
ReplyDeleteyour words was so beautiful, i was on the edge hoping to hear more...
Happy to know it.. Smiles...
Someone is Special
@ fiveloaf
ReplyDeletevery generous in your last line..a great write my friend..
Happy fiveloaf...
Someone is Special
@ Rashmi
ReplyDeleteSo very special.......
SmileS.. Rashmi...
Someone is Special
@ scentofmyheart
ReplyDeleteMay you have that eternal love on your way. Lovely poem, sweet, heartfelt! The award brilliant!
Thank you thank you thank you...
Someone is Special
@ lynnaima
ReplyDeleteThis reads like the beginning of a song... sweet! :)
Happy rally!/
Glad it did.. Happy Man...
Someone is Special
@ clariice
ReplyDeleteI love the romance hidden behind the lines. But I do wonder sometimes how hard/easy it is to keep the true love burning strong against time....
true.. what to do??? Happy to read your comment...
Someone is Special
@ JL Dodge
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem !! Happy rally !!
Thank you so much Dodge....
Someone is Special
@ Promising Poets Parking Lot
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot.. Happy Man...
Someone is Special
@ mstevensson
ReplyDelete"The hurting reasons make me wait / I still love you with all my heart"
I love the lack of rhyme here, it really emphasizes the point. Also, the use of heart, which is so close to hate which would rhyme drives it home even more. Beautifully crafted.
Aww.. thank you so much.. Happy...
Someone is Special
@ Leo
ReplyDeletevery romantic, SiS..
Thanks a lot Leo...
Someone is Special
@ Finer Friday
ReplyDeleteExcellent words sis
Glad to read your comment.. Happy man...
Someone is Special
@ Gaurang Rao
ReplyDeleteeautifully expressed
Thanks a lot Gaurang...
Someone is Special
@ abthomas
ReplyDeleteGreat write - if only we could only remember with fondness some of our past!
Ab. glad to read your comments.. Happy.. Happy.. Happy...
Someone is Special
@ Dragon Katet
ReplyDeleteSuch well expressed emotions in this. I hope you find the eternal peace and love you are seeking.
Thank you so much... I wish I am...
Someone is Special
@ argentpoet
ReplyDeleteI love how powerful your words are and how strong love can be despite adversity.
aww.. That's so sweet of you.. Happy...
Someone is Special
@ Marlee-I Mystic
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece. True love is a gift
Of course it is.. Glad to have you here..
Someone is Special
@ adreamygal
ReplyDeleteAh the essence of love and trueness in the lines ! :) They are simple-y beautiful SiS .. The words convey so many feelings and emotions , I am sure every heart , in love will be able to understand and most of us , do go through this .. Wishing for your eternal love to stay forever ! :)
dreamy, thank you so much for your sweet words.. I am really happy...
Someone is Special
@ nohaemile
ReplyDeleteThank you for such sweet love poem
Glad to read your comments.. Happy Man...
Someone is Special
@ Raghu
ReplyDeleteNice one buddy...
Thank you so much Buddy...
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@ sajeevkmenon
ReplyDeleteyour poem paints a beautiful picture of love:-)
Aww.. Thank you so so so much.. Happy to read your comment..
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@ shweta
ReplyDeleteshort and sweet :)
Sweet admirer... Thank you so much..
Someone is Special
short, simple yet amazing...the bridge was a nice way to convey the connection....liked it a lot....
ReplyDelete@ ashzzes
ReplyDeleteshort, simple yet amazing...the bridge was a nice way to convey the connection....liked it a lot....
Thank you so much Aish...