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Perfect Murder:
He realized she was dead. He untied the lace to remove the polythene cover from her radiant face and he slept with the dead body. Later in the morning, reports said that she died due to breathing difficulty, which caused heart attack. He was the happiest person in the world and that’s a perfect murder!
Romantic Love:
She doubted whether angels exist or not?
‘Of course, angels exist and I live with them,’ he said.
She was surprised a bit, and she asked, ‘Really?’
He clarified her saying, ‘Can’t you see an angel here?’
She turned pink on seeing her photograph. He hugged her and said, ‘Sweetheart I love you!’
She echoed!
Two Minutes:
He had been there quite a few times, though it was strange, when he experienced that, he had gone mad. He checked if her breath was normal to reassure that what had happened in the last two minutes were dreams, but that mysterious feeling terrified him. He whispered in her ears, ‘Love You!’ She smiled!
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The above post is composed of three 55’s in which first two stands on its own with an element of surprise and the third one connects the two with an ending. This is the third time I’m trying this form (3 55's). Do leave your footprints!
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
Cute two minutes :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing Special One :)
Stay Smiling ...
My Best Wishes~
3 55ers.... nice concept!
ReplyDelete@ Simran
ReplyDeleteCute two minutes :)
Amazing Special One :)
Stay Smiling ...
My Best Wishes~
I'm very very happy to read your encouraging words Little One.. Happy Man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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@ Sweta
ReplyDelete3 55ers.... nice concept!
Thank you so much Sweta.. Smiles...
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Wow, you totally threw me off in the first para. That is some intense scripting! All the best!
ReplyDeleteबहुत बेहतरीन रचना है
ReplyDeleteमै तो मंत्रमुग्ध होगया
wow ... on its own the first two are wonderful but with the third one its just toooooooooooo...good ...!!!! This is the firt time I am reading 3 55ers like this . Very nice . Both the concept and the story
ReplyDeleteHey SIS nice post for BAT-29 and loved the way you built the suspense. All the best
ReplyDeletegood one :) best of luck for BAT
ReplyDeleteThat made interesting reading. Liked the concept
ReplyDeleteATB
Cheers
CRD
Pardon my lack of understanding SiS, I can sense that this is a wonderful piece of writing, but either I am a bit lost (which is more likely to be the case) or the 55ers are a bit difficult to understand..
ReplyDeleteAnyways, my best wishes are as always with you..
crazy yet awesome. . !!!
ReplyDeleteThank god it was only a dream. . !!!
Brilliantly awesome.. First one is very interesting .. Different concept but its good
ReplyDelete@ Sandy
ReplyDeleteSandy,
Welcome to Few Miles! Glad and Happy to read your comment.. Keep visiting.. Smiles..
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@ Shashiprakash Saini
ReplyDeleteबहुत बेहतरीन रचना है
मै तो मंत्रमुग्ध होगया
Welcome! Glad and thanks! I'm delighted to read your comment.. Probably, the first comment I received in Hindi! Thanks!
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@ TTT
ReplyDeletewow ... on its own the first two are wonderful but with the third one its just toooooooooooo...good ...!!!! This is the firt time I am reading 3 55ers like this . Very nice . Both the concept and the story
Thank you so much and glad to read your words.. Blessed, I'm
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@ Engram
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! Glad you loved the way I wrote.. Smiles...
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@ Ash
ReplyDeleteThanks! Welcome!
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@ CRD
ReplyDeleteThank you so much CRD.. Happy! to read your words!
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@ Animesh Ganguly
ReplyDeleteHmmm I'm sure you understood it now.. Happy and Glad Ani... Keep visiting bro!
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@ sulaiman sait
ReplyDeleteHmmm crazy yet awesome!!!!!!!! Thanks bro! Happy to have you here!
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@ Anjali Saini
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly awesome.. First one is very interesting .. Different concept but its good
Anjali,
Welcome to Few Miles! It is my pleasure to have you here and to read your encouraging words... Thanks! Keep visiting..
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Interesting attempt that one. Like your concept of trying to tell a story through 3 55ers.
ReplyDeleteSimply Awesome!! :)
ReplyDeleteWow this is something new
ReplyDeleteOk so the first one was gruesomely pathetically awesome
Second one was sweetly and cutely awesome
Third one was logically and fundamentally awesome
In short it was awesome! :D
call it my lack of intellect or whateverbut i sincerely couln't make out how the third one linked the first two........!!!!!!11
ReplyDeleteinteresting fiction.
ReplyDeletewow SIS!,nice way of concluding the story! but what I loved more were the two contradicting thoughts of love and murder!
ReplyDeletelovely indeed:D
Very interesting "someone special"
ReplyDeleteG
i love the "perfect murder" more than romantic love ...
Thanks
Anu
@ The Fool
ReplyDeleteThank you so much TF! Glad to have you here and to read your words.. Keep coming!
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@ rohanabstractedly
ReplyDeleteSimply Awesome!! :)
Rohan,
Welcome to Few Miles! Glad you felt it awesome.. Thanks!!!!
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@ JJ
ReplyDeleteWow wow wow JJ - you made my day!!!!!!!!! Happy Man..
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@ Yatin Khurana
ReplyDeletecall it my lack of intellect or whateverbut i sincerely couln't make out how the third one linked the first two........!!!!!!11
Yatin, I can explain you man... No worry.. Keep coming!
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@ muthu
ReplyDeleteWelcome and Thanks!
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@ ashzzes
ReplyDeletewow SIS!,nice way of concluding the story! but what I loved more were the two contradicting thoughts of love and murder!
lovely indeed:D
Aish,
You got me!!! Love and Murder - What a perfect contradiction! Thanks, you too made my day! Happy Man!
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@ Anu Gupta
ReplyDeleteVery interesting "someone special"
G
i love the "perfect murder" more than romantic love ...
Thanks
Anu
Glad to know that Anu.. Thanks again for your sweet and constant support!
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Loved it :) very nice and unique
ReplyDeleteOne can have horrible dreams .. thank God, in this case it did not last for more than two minutes!
ReplyDeleteI Second JJ...Awesome in all the ways!!
ReplyDeleteDifferent and nicely so! Kudos.
ReplyDeleteSo cute....sweet two minutes
ReplyDeleteWow...two minutes took me off !
ReplyDelete@ jaish_vats
ReplyDeleteLoved it :) very nice and unique
Thank you so much Jaish.. Glad you loved it..
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@ aativas
ReplyDeleteOne can have horrible dreams .. thank God, in this case it did not last for more than two minutes!
Thank you so much Aativas, and yes it was just for two minutes..!
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@ Manasa
ReplyDeleteI Second JJ...Awesome in all the ways!!
Thank you so much Manasa! Pleasure to read your comment..
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@ Richi Baidwan
ReplyDeleteDifferent and nicely so! Kudos.
Thank you so much Richi! Welcome to Few Miles!
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@ Karan Shah
ReplyDeleteSo cute....sweet two minutes
Thank you so much for your cute comment Karan.. It means a lot to me..
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@ HA!fA ZUbA!R
ReplyDeleteWow...two minutes took me off !
Thank you, Happy! Happy! Happy! keep visiting..
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