! ~ Waited Gift ~ ! (Haiku)
waited gift he is
born to call me as, 'AMMA'
my sweet little prince
! ~ Waited Gift ~ ! (Butterfly Cinquain
My Prince
My Waited Gift
He is a sweet rhyme
Born to call me as 'Mom', Sweetly
Sweet Place
He is bliss to my motherhood
A song, art, and poetry
My tear of joy
My World
Haiku, published as a part of
Haiku Heights, Prompt 40: Born
Sensational Haiku Wednesday, Theme: Freestyle
Butterfly Cinquain, published as a part of
Poetry Potluck @ Jingle Poetry, Theme: Arts, Music and Poetry
One Single Impression, Prompt: Place
One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry
Image Credits: Google Search
waited gift he is
born to call me as, 'AMMA'
my sweet little prince
! ~ Waited Gift ~ ! (Butterfly Cinquain
My Prince
My Waited Gift
He is a sweet rhyme
Born to call me as 'Mom', Sweetly
Sweet Place
He is bliss to my motherhood
A song, art, and poetry
My tear of joy
My World
Haiku, published as a part of
Haiku Heights, Prompt 40: Born
Sensational Haiku Wednesday, Theme: Freestyle
Butterfly Cinquain, published as a part of
Poetry Potluck @ Jingle Poetry, Theme: Arts, Music and Poetry
One Single Impression, Prompt: Place
One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry
Image Credits: Google Search
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what a sweet poem to a sweet begining. a waited gift, i wish the prince to a gift forever, a precious gift.
ReplyDeletelove,
bala
A gift to be wrapped in the warmth of your heart..and help fly by giving wings of courage and confidence..as it grows up to turn into a wonderful human being.. and the best part is even then he would call his mom..Amma.. very special gift this.. and thanks for your wonderful comments on review by Leo..you people indeed overwhelmed.. me.. received numerous recognitions in life..and resultant reactions too..reaching a stage..where even a mention of recognition scares me.. but this I shall cherish forever..
ReplyDeletewhat a priceless gift! thank you for sharing, SiS!
ReplyDeleteyou send your mom smiling and flying..
ReplyDeletebless you and your family.
what a sweet son to her.
Cinquains are lots of fun I have never seen a butterfly one tho, and so lovely I remember moments like this = )
ReplyDeleteBeautiful memories expressed. Motherhood is a great gift.
ReplyDeleteAwe....
ReplyDeleteCongratulations and well worth the wait!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing so dear to your heart.
awww the picture is so cute :)
ReplyDeleteBabies sure can bring joy :)
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/24/the-corridors-of-supposition/
A++
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking.
lovely entry.
Aw! Sweet!
ReplyDeleteSweet! definitely worth the wait.
ReplyDeleteah the most precious gift - the gift of motherhood and experiencing the raw flesh in your hands .. it does change the world and perspectives .. wonderfully captured
ReplyDeletesweet cherishes lingers on forever.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/13/a-chinese-love-story/
ReplyDeleteso special. love it :)
ReplyDeleteUtterly precious!
ReplyDeleteHere's mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/04/25/relativity-of-time-and-place/
The gift is something special and it's the arrival of a new-born when one experiences an injection of new hope and life in the world:)
ReplyDeleteKeep up with your 'gifting'!
Very nice use of the form.
ReplyDeleteTwo very exceptional pieces!
ReplyDeletethe most wondrous gift in life! ♥
ReplyDeletebig smiles. very beautiful the birth of new life...
ReplyDeleteThe feel of motherhood is priceless and the joy of a new born is boundless. :)
ReplyDeleteBless!
beautifully written; a beautiful occasion
ReplyDeleteSo an important moment worthy of being captured in poetry
ReplyDeleteThe gift of life is so sweet. Lovely.....
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Touching and sweet one..I loved it
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and cute.. Guess it feels really great to be a mom :)
ReplyDeleteHere is mine:
http://sandhyaguptamp.blogspot.com/2011/04/just-checking-out.html
I would say the most wonderful gift indeed... Here I have scribbled few interesting things about my first time motherhood..
ReplyDelete@ bala
ReplyDeleteof course he is a gift to this world.. Happy man.. Thanks sir..
Someone is Special
@ Ramesh Sood
ReplyDeleteRameshji, so sweet of you.. Glad to read your reply for my comments.. Happy happy Man
Someone is Special
@ beccagivens
ReplyDeleteof course a priceless gift to my sweet friend.. Hmm thanks becca for your sweet encouraging words..
Someone is Special
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteJi, so sweet of you.. Happy for your blessings thank you thank you thank you
Someone is Special
@ Amanda Moore
ReplyDeleteAmanda, I'm super glad that this poem becomes a memorable moment for you.. And of course I was never heard of this name untill I penned this.. Hmm thank you so much Amand..
Someone is Special
@ teric
ReplyDeleteof course it is teri.. I was glad my friend was blessed with a cute gift..
Someone is Special
@ booguloo
ReplyDeleteAwe.... your comment make me go awee.. thank you thank you..
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@ Andy
ReplyDeleteof course well worth wait, he is special.. hmm thank you Andy
Someone is Special
@ lynnaima
ReplyDeleteyes LTBL, the pic is cute.. actually I want to put the real pic but didn't.. Hmm Babies are source of joy for sure and sorry I missed to read your post.. Hmm..
Someone is Special
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ji.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ Danielle Mari
ReplyDeleteAw! Sweet! cho sweet na.. thank you thank you thank you..
Someone is Special
@ Reflections
ReplyDeleteSweet! definitely worth the wait. of course Relfections.. Glad to have you back here.. Thank you..
Someone is Special
@ adreamygal
ReplyDeleteah the most precious gift - the gift of motherhood and experiencing the raw flesh in your hands .. it does change the world and perspectives .. wonderfully captured
aww.. dreamy your words mean a lot to me.. thank you so much for your enouraging words.. Happy..
Someone is Special
@ fiveloaf
ReplyDeletethank you five loaf.. sorry missed to read your entry.. will do it asap.. Thank you..
Someone is Special
@ bendedspoon
ReplyDeleteaww.. thank you so much bendedspoon.. so sweet of you..
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@ Kim Nelson
ReplyDeleteUtterly precious! cho sweet and precious comment.. thanks kim..
Someone is Special
@ clariice
ReplyDeletethank you thank you thank you.. so sweet of you..
Someone is Special
@ deep
ReplyDeletethank you so much and glad you like it..
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@ abthomas
ReplyDeleteTwo very exceptional pieces! AB you made my day.. Thank you so much for your sweet words..
Someone is Special
@ haikulovesongs
ReplyDeleteof course you are 1000000% right.. hmm glad to have you back here..
Someone is Special
@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteof course Brian.. Glad to have you here. and thank for the smiles you bring through your comment..
Someone is Special
@ Emmanuel Ibok
ReplyDeleteThe feel of motherhood is priceless and the joy of a new born is boundless. :) agreed.. thank you so much..
Someone is Special
@ Paulami
ReplyDeleteglad you felt the beauty of the piece Paulami.. Happy Man..
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@ John (@bookdreamer)
ReplyDeleteSo an important moment worthy of being captured in poetry, SmileS, and thanks for acknowledging it..
Someone is Special
@ Cassiopeia Rises
ReplyDeleteGlad you love it Melanie.. Happy to have you here.. Thank you so much for the smiles..
Someone is Special
@ UmaAnandane
ReplyDeleteTouching and sweet one..I loved it Glad you love it Uma.. Thank you thank you thank you..
Someone is Special
@ saya
ReplyDeleteundoubtedly, it is a great feeling.. and thank you for all the blessings..
Someone is Special
@ Nishana
ReplyDeleteaww, yours was so sweet... a girl expressing her feel would be always great than a guy expressing it after hearing it.. hmm, moms are precious..
Someone is Special