Life without you is
As silent as falling sand
Reveals pain behind
“Life without you reveals pain behind” – Six Word Saturday
Published as a part of
Magic Pie, 32
Theme Thursday - Reveal
recuerda mi corazon - Haiku My Heart
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
pain of nothingness indeed.
ReplyDeleteAnd often from the pain arises life anew. Beautiful.
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and that pain brings out such wonderful words...
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ReplyDeleteThis pain is often poignant. And diminishes with time.
Nice write here. Pain. Very real. Love and Light, Sender
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I accept that.. Thank you so much..
--Someone IS Special--
@ Prayer Girl
ReplyDeleteWelcome back!
Thank you so much for those beautiful words.
--Someone IS Special--
@ Priyanka Bhowmick
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those encouraging words. Yes pain brings out wonderful words..
--Someone IS Special--
@ ninotaziz
ReplyDeleteWelcome back!
Thank you so much.. Yes, it diminished at times..
--Someone IS Special--
@ senderupwords
ReplyDeleteWelcome back Sender!
Thank you so much for those encouraging words..
--Someone IS Special--
u r so smart,
ReplyDeleteusing one stone killing two birds, one post carrying three memes.
have fun!
Pain is hard to write about for me- well done.
ReplyDeleteSimple yet profound... Great pain is mostly silent, only thing heard is the sound of breaking of your own heart..
ReplyDeleteFantastic Haiku !!
One has to bear it..
ReplyDeletetimeless flies search for fries
the pain of being left is terrible which your haiku sums up so well.
ReplyDeleteThe simple, elegant beauty of your haiku takes away some of the pain, though... :)
ReplyDeleteSuch sadness in these words.
ReplyDeletesuch few words - and such mesmerizing power - read it several times - and loved how it felt - truly a revelation!
ReplyDeletePoignant haiku. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSo very nice!
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ReplyDeleteIt is a awesome feeling when we hear those from you Ji.. Thank you so so much.. It is your blessings that I am able to pen down good ones..
--Someone Is Special--
@ kathew
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much.. Do keep coming..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Abhilasha-The Desire
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much for those wonderful encouraging words.. I am blessed..
--Someone Is Special--
@ gautami tripathy
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much and yes they have to bear it..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Everyday Goddess
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much for those encouraging words and yes pain is terrible to bear...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Titanium
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much for those wonderful encouraging words...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Meri
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--Someone Is Special--
@ Claudia
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much for your encouraging words.... I am blessed and happy to know that you read it several times.. Thanks Thanks Thanks...
--Someone Is Special--
@ willow
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your encouraging words and also for following me...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Tumblewords:
ReplyDeleteThank you so much...
--Someone Is Special--
Appreciate.
ReplyDeleteMy first time here to see Haiku My Heart Friday. You've summed up the pain of it.
Peace.
Something we all experience, yet something we often find hard to write about.
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@ Spadoman
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so so much for those encouraging words..
--Someone Is Specail--
@ Crystal Jigsaw
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Thank you so so much for those encouraging words, pain..
--Someone Is Specail--
Pain is poignant, vanishes with time.
ReplyDeleteFirst time on your blog, following you now :)
poignant image..
ReplyDeletelends deafening silence.
not until one takes their leave are we truly aware of the depth they fill
in our every shared moment.
you can almost mark the passing of time just looking at this...
and reading your haunting words.
Beautifully and skillfully written. Would this now be called a Magpaiku?
ReplyDeleteOh my god excellent writing as always, my friend!=D love your Magpaiku!^^~
ReplyDeleteVery touching and beautifully written.
ReplyDelete"As silent as falling sand."
ReplyDeleteI like that!
You captured the pain of a broken heart. good job!
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Someone IS special! I like your haiku.
ReplyDeletePain can be so quiet and yet seem to loud. Well said!
ReplyDeleteI love this Haiku!
ReplyDeleteFantastic!
ReplyDeleteStark image, like pain itself, illustrates your words perfectly.
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
~Deb
That's a very strong statement. Sad & beautiful at the same time.
ReplyDeletesuch pain, sad....
ReplyDeletenicely done
and out of that pain rises the phoenix to life anew...nice write...
ReplyDeletefrom pain comes healing
ReplyDeletePain can be acute, brief as a lovely haiku - but the memory of it seems always long-lasting.
ReplyDelete@ Nostalgic
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thanks for your encouraging words and also for following me.. Do keep coming..
--Someone Is Special--
@ rebecca
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--Someone Is Special--
@ Monkey Ma
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much for your beautiful encouraging words... Why not? We will call as "Magpaiku"
--Someone Is Special--
@ RiikaInfinityy
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much Riika for your sweet encouraging words always... glad to know that you loved "Magpaiku"
--Someone Is Special--
@ Riette
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--Someone Is Special--
@ Mama Zen
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--Someone Is Special--
@ River
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Thanks you so much for your encouraging words...
--Someone Is Special--
@ David
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I am glad to know that you liked my HAIKU.. Thanks you so much for your encouraging words...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Dot-Com
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--Someone Is Special--
@ Kristen Haskell
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Glad to know that.. Thanks you so much for your sweet encouraging words...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Scarlet Ily
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--Someone Is Special--
@ paper-n-soul
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--Someone Is Special--
@ kathi harris
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--Someone Is Special--
@ Reflections
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--Someone Is Special--
@ Brian Miller
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--Someone Is Special--
@ C.M. Jackson
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@ Lydia
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--Someone Is Special--
nice one.... losing someone is so painful
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@ Haisley
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words and yes of course you are right..
--Someone Is Special--