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The Secret


This post has been published by me as a part of Blog-a-Ton 56; the fifty-sixth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write.

On hearing an unfamiliar scream, he rushed inside the room. His lovable wife, looked at him and the new-born angel, and whispered, "I will..."

He waited her to complete the sentence, but on the seeing blank lines in the heart monitor, his heart skipped a beat.

The doctor held his hands and said, "We could not save your wife. Sorry." Tears poured down from his eyes. The nurse gave him his angel, and the doctor asked him follow the process to complete the formalities.

And what she wanted to say remained a secret till her daughter published her debut novel.


Info:- Drabble refers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 100 words.

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Saravanakumar Murugan
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Saravanakumar Murugan

Author & Storyteller · Someone is Special

Senior technology leader, writer, and photographer. What began in 2009 as a romantic journaling sanctuary on Few Miles has grown into published books (Shades of Life, Return), 55-word microfiction, and quiet stories that stay with people long after reading.

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Comments

  1. Emotional high !
    now the voting is becoming tougher ...
    in my voting list for sure :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Mahesh! A comment like this from you means a lot to me!

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  2. I am fed up of saying the same thing...awesome yet again.

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  3. Very sad and emotional!! Beautiful.

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  4. Pained... it evoked the right amount of emotion - also justifying the theme [ secret] well.

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  5. a powerful story in just 100 words,

    My BAT56 entry A Secret Revealed

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  6. Amazing how you could fit such an emotional story in just 100 words.
    ATB!

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  7. Hmm..Secret passed...nice
    All the best for BATOM

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