The Secret
This post has been published by me as a part of Blog-a-Ton 56; the fifty-sixth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write.
On hearing an unfamiliar scream, he rushed inside the room. His lovable wife, looked at him and the new-born angel, and whispered, "I will..."
He waited her to complete the sentence, but on the seeing blank lines in the heart monitor, his heart skipped a beat.
The doctor held his hands and said, "We could not save your wife. Sorry." Tears poured down from his eyes. The nurse gave him his angel, and the doctor asked him follow the process to complete the formalities.
And what she wanted to say remained a secret till her daughter published her debut novel.
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Emotional high !
ReplyDeletenow the voting is becoming tougher ...
in my voting list for sure :)
Thank you so much, Mahesh! A comment like this from you means a lot to me!
DeleteI am fed up of saying the same thing...awesome yet again.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteVery sad and emotional!! Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Mam :)
DeletePained... it evoked the right amount of emotion - also justifying the theme [ secret] well.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Viyoma!
DeleteEmotional piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Salvwi!
Deletea powerful story in just 100 words,
ReplyDeleteMy BAT56 entry A Secret Revealed
Thank you so much, Cifar!
DeleteAmazing how you could fit such an emotional story in just 100 words.
ReplyDeleteATB!
Thank you so much Gauri!
DeleteHmm..Secret passed...nice
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BATOM
Thank you, Megha :D
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