“Is this the bliss of nature?” I questioned myself several times but never found the answer. “Am I bad in judging the beauty of the nature? Maybe I am,” my mind said, “Never think so... As long as you enjoy the beauty of nightfall, you are not,” my heart said. “Am I a nature admirer?”
Info:- 55-Fiction refers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 55 words.
The bliss of nature
Save it for our safety
Act now or never
Published as a part of
Tale 37
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Prompt: Judge, Nightfall, Safety
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
Very nice, I liked both pieces and felt the emotions in each. Fantastic as always! Thanks for sharing with us!
ReplyDeleteAs I have told you before your writings have bcme more matured over the last few months....emotion is your forte for sure...
ReplyDeleteNice thinking here SIS with a questioning mind and a chiding heart. Surely they have left you in a quandary!!
ReplyDeleteLiked this post on romancing with Nature!!
I love nature too...:-) And this 55 fiction of yours reminded me of how beautiful nature is...:-)
ReplyDeleteI will always be a nature-lover!
Ah the simplicity in your words , they always inviting and touches the tender corner of heart ! Droppin ga comment after along time , and so , as I lsaw now , heading towards your romance and knot-ty place :D
ReplyDeleteYOuve combined the prompts well! Nice message in a haiku. Well communicated thought!!! :D
ReplyDelete@ LeiffyV
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it LeiffyV.. Thanks for all the smiles and sweet words.. Happy to have you here..
--Someone is Special--
@ Sourav
ReplyDeleteAww. Thanks Sourav, thank you so much for the sweet words of encouragement.. Glad to have you here..
--Someone is Special--
@ Nanka
ReplyDeleteNanka, thank you so much for the sweet encouraging words.. Glad to know that.. Romancing with Nature.. Aw... thanks once again for this..
--Someone is Special--
@ Amity
ReplyDeleteGlad you too love nature and thanks for the sweet words Amity.. Great, loving the mysterious and wonderful nature is too great..
--Someone is Special--
@ adreamygal
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that adreamygal.. Thank you so much for the comments and will be happy to know from you about my romantic and knotty place./
--Someone is Special--
@ Vibhuti B
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that Vibz.. Thank you so much for the sweet words.. Happy man.. and you are one of my best critic you know..
--Someone is Special--
I agree, there is much in so few words..very interesting...Jae
ReplyDelete@ Jaerose
ReplyDeleteThanks for the sweet encouraging words.. I too aceept that and that is why I admire G-Man a lot, he is the one who introduced 55-Fiction to me.. Read more of this kind tomorrow in G-Man's space..
--Someone is Special--
like the brevity of this piece and the questions you raise. nice writing
ReplyDelete@ gs batty
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.. I am very much on reading your comment..
--Someone is Special--
Nice ideation on philosophy.
ReplyDelete“ And in the end, it's not the years in your life that count, It's the life in your years that matters ! ! " I loved the tag line of your blog.
Nice..!
Hi! So sorry to take so long to track you down. Your comments don't link back to your blog. Did you know that? Finally realized I could track through JP.
ReplyDeleteYou've redecorated your blog. Wonderful! I love it. Tasteful.
Lovely poems ... and do so agree with the urgency of the message, which is enhanced by your brevity.
Poem on, my friend. Happy day to you.
Great reflective thoughts. So much to appreciate in nature so much to spoil
ReplyDeleteThanks for the 55s
SIS....
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic job on this!
Loved your 55 My Friend.
Thank You for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
i am happy to huga tree...smiles.
ReplyDeleteI think deep down you know the answers to these questions. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteIn all aspects of nature I love, except for maybe the nastiness of some people. LOL
ReplyDeleteLoved your birthday 55 too.
Here's mine
Hope you can find time to visit.
Happy Friday
Happy weekend.
Naturally, this was a great 55!
ReplyDeleteInteresting 55!
ReplyDeleteSometimes we think too much when we should just enjoy. Your point is well taken.
ReplyDeleteMy 55 is HERE .
@ RAHUL: The Weakest Point is Love
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much Rahul for visiting my space..
--Someone is Special--
@ JamieDedes
ReplyDeleteOh Jamie is it.. I never know that.. Thanks for the compliments.. Glad to know that...
--Someone is Special--
@ moondustwriter
ReplyDeleteI accept that.. So much to appreciate and so much to spoil well said.. Thanks for visiting my space.. and glad you liked it..
--Someone is Special--
@ G-Man
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it G-Man.. Thank you so much for the sweet words of encouragement and wish you the same..
--Someone is Special--
@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteEven I love too Brian.. Thanks for all the smiles..
--Someone is Special-
@ KB
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that KB.. Of course I do.. Thanks man for the sweet words here..
--Someone is Special--
@ HOOTIN' ANNI
ReplyDeleteGlad you love in all aspects.. and I too accpet that.. Happy you loved birthday too..
Wish you a very happy weekend..
--Someone is Special--
@ Eric Alder
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that Eric.. You always support me so much thanks for the smiles.. Wish you a very happy weekend..
--Someone is Special--
@ Mama Zen
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that ... Thank you so much..
--Someone is Special--
@ MMonkey Man
ReplyDeleteThanks Monkey man for that.. And I accept your point too.. Sure will stop by yours..
--Someone is Special--
Very nice
ReplyDelete@ A
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that .. Thank you so much..
--Someone is Special--
yes you are...a special admirer..!!!
ReplyDeletenice tale dear..!!
thanks for joining the Tales Train..!!
See you next Thursday..!!
beautiful picture Reminds me of the lush green land that i have left behind
ReplyDeleteI can imagine that guy to be me .. only we dont have any gate to our fields its all open :)
Yea we have to save our planet earth and nature else nature will teach us and give us a good eply back ...
Bikram's
I really like the emotion in this story. It's so well told.
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful weekend :)
oh my.. lot of confusion, SiS.. what'd you decide finally? nature admirer or not?
ReplyDelete@ Yamini Meduri
ReplyDeleteThanks for the special words Yamini.. Happy Man you know, linked after almost three weeks.. Thanks for the wonderful image..
--Someone is Special--
@ Bikramjit
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that and yeah what ever you said is right..
--Someone is Special--
@ Thom
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that Thom.. Thank you so much and wish you the same..
--Someone is Special--
@ Leo
ReplyDeleteYup, found the answer Leo.. I am... And thanks for dropping your feedback after a small gap..
The name (LEO) that appears in the comment space itself makes me happy..
--Someone is Special--
Ohhh.. I liked the way you have pictured these conflicting thoughts...
ReplyDeleteA neatly done 55, SiS... Bravo!!
@ Kavita
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Kavi.. Thank you so much for the sweet words..
Merry Christmas...
--Someone is Special--