He... ......She
A marriage of two souls
united by three knots
with sacred thread
of lifelong love
respect &
trust as
WE
Submitted to
Thursday Poets Rally, Week 32
"A place where poetry is cherished and poets are recognized for their talents"
I know I am late in posting; probably this should have been posted on or before November 1st but I am posting today to make everyone know that Someone Is Special, official part of NaNoWriMo going to take part and try his hand. I am not sure of completing the challenge but I will give my best to complete the task of 50,000 words, the magical figure for an amateur writer.
I am also writing for Leo’s Z-A Challenge (bits and pieces of what I write for NaNo) here, it is a combo work for me and it may result as a delight if I am successful. I am clear on my part but I wanted my blogging friends to be with me throughout this tough time and push me harder to accomplish this challenge. I may not write for all the memes that I do usually; I may not read my fellow bloggers work but I promise once this is done, I am sure I will reciprocate them.
If you want to know more about NaNo, visit Jamie here and get clarified. Thanks Jamie for your wonderful help.
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
wow..
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cheers
As I read this my focus went on label 'Three knots' and i tht maybe its a new style of poetry but ur comment in my blog makes me more inquistic :)
ReplyDeleteI love ur experiment in styles and beauty of the words :)
@ Dakshi
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles ! Happy to see those reactuons.. Thank you so much Dakshi for those sweet reactions and also for following me..
--Someone IS Special--
@ Scribbling Girl
ReplyDeleteWelcome back after a break..Glad you loved it and happy to know that.. Thanks a lot Scribbling Girl.. Watch this space and enjoy the knots..
--Someone Is Special--
thats a lovely write. Good luck for the challenges :)
ReplyDelete@ Rajalakshmi
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
welcome to Poets Rally.
ReplyDeletesuper witty image,
beautiful entry.
Thanks for sharing.
I loved how He----She became We with three knots. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteI love the form you used for the poem, and its flow. Awesome simplicity in this piece.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful write for a lovely sentiment - a pleasure to read, thanks!
ReplyDeletesuch a regal way to think of joining two hearts... by three knots! May your lives as one be full of joy.
ReplyDeleteHe and she becoming we, is so heavenly thought.
ReplyDeletesimple and beautiful.
He and she = we ..always very sweet! Good luck with the challenge at nanowrimo! Thanks for stopping by at my blog!
ReplyDeletevery beautiful, love the visual to match the sentiment...
ReplyDeleteI love how you seamlessly fit the words into a heart that flows.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the moving theme and the layout which worked so well!
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So amazing! I loved this!
ReplyDeletePure romance. Succinct and sweet.
ReplyDeletegreat poem for the thursday rally.
ReplyDeletesimple, to the point,
yet descriptive
and perfectly so
thank you
-loveblushfever
I love romantic poetry, and yours is a poem I can very much relate to because I am part of a "we" and learning about everything that means. Lovely! :)
ReplyDeleteThat's no mean feat SiS...go..go..go..and am sure you can do it with flying colors..:-)
ReplyDeleteNow going to check your Three KNots! :-)
Simplicity is always a treasure.. in poetry as in fiction show rather than tell for language is the brushstroke.
ReplyDeletethank you for visiting my site.
best
unremarkable-m
Its Beautiful... I love the colors and the words.. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
What a lovely tribute to a couple's commitment--very sweet.
ReplyDeleteLeave it it S.I.S. to have me smile at a heart shaped poem after touching my dark side with my own offering. Fantastic work, love it!
ReplyDeletethe shape and the words are wonderful together! This poem is beautiful...the three knots...what is the history behind that symbol?
ReplyDeleteI love learning about such things...
Happy Rally! and excited to be a part of Leo's Z to A with you!
Haha I love it!
ReplyDeleteWith Question,
Theo Smith
This is just charming and sweet and simple in all the best way. How romantic. I love it. Poem on...and happy Rally.
ReplyDelete@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteglad to know that Ji.. Wish you a Happy Diwali.. and thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ dan roberson
ReplyDeletehmmm that is the secret. Wish you a Happy Diwali.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special-
@ gnarlyoak
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it.. Happy to hear those.. Wish you a Happy Diwali.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ abthomas
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved the sentiment and felt it beatuiful.. Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ 2zpoint
ReplyDeleteof course it is tradition right.. Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ drmadangoyal
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it beauitful and simple.. Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ scentofmyheart
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it sweet.. Thank you so much for the wishes.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ andulasia
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it and felt it beauitful.. Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ ocdbloggergirl
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it... Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ jessicasjapes
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it... Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Thoughts Not Lost
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it... Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ G.K. Asante
ReplyDeleteGladly... i love to be romantic.. Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ klfaulds
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.... Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ The Reason You Come
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that, enjoy the life and love as much as you can.... Thank you so much.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Amity
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Amity.. You are so supportive to me and glad you gonna read my THREE KNOTS.. Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ unremarkable_m
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much.... Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Shashi
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it beautiful..Happy to hear those words.. Thank you so much.... Wish you a Happy Diwali..
PS: I read your interview. it was lovely..
--Someone Is Special--
@ bodhirose
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it sweet.. Thank you so much.... Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ LeiffyV
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that LeiffyV.. Thank you so much.... Wish you a Happy Diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ itslovelyannie.com
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that you the felt the poem wonderful and beautiful.. Thank you so much.... Wish you a Happy Diwali..
PS: Good to learn, you eagerness is great, In Hindus marriage, a guy use to tie a yellow thread around girl's neck and that too with three knots, also read my novel.. You can learn it easily..
Glad to be a part with you in Leo's Challenge..
--Someone Is Special--
@ theophillussmith
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it.. Thank you so much.. wish you a happy diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
@ JamieDedes
ReplyDeleteJamie, Glad you loved it and felt it charming, sweet and simple.. As i said, i love to be romantic.... Thank you so much.. Happy rally and Wish you a happy diwali..
--Someone Is Special--
Thanks for reading the Interview of Swami Ji, a great friend of mine and a great soul.. It was interesting to see how a software professional working in Hong Kong transformed into a swami. Giving here the link to it, if some one is curious enough to explore more of the interview and "making of a swami"
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Thanks for reading it.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
A clever format in this little ditty, and a beautiful expression.
ReplyDeleteAnita.
absolutely lovely!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE short poetry. nice
ReplyDelete@ Shashi
ReplyDeleteSure Shashi, I will read it.. Thank you so much...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Aquarius63
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Glory
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it Glory.. Thank you so much...
--Someone Is Special--
@ marit
ReplyDeleteThank you so much... Happy to hear those loved words..
--Someone Is Special--
Very beautifully written =D, great job as always!=P
ReplyDeleteBeautiful..!!
ReplyDeleteI like that shape you have done with the words- how so creative..
Very well done..
Loads of Love- xoxox
just the right partner for my YOU poem.
ReplyDeleteThis one's wonderful dear!
Love,
B
very beautiful thoughts, SiS.. lovely entry to the Rally.
ReplyDeletewonderfully written and it's exciting to see you are participating in some of the various challenges that are going on in the poet communities! cheers!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.Love the way how you made he & she,we..
ReplyDeleteYou have a magic with words for sure.
You will sure be successful in your task ahead...Go on with full spirit...
Wish you all the very Best..
@ RiikaInfinityy
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it beauitful Riika.. Thank you so much..
--Someone IS Special--
@ Olivia
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it beauitful Olivia, Happy to know that.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ thisisbrixx
ReplyDeleteAw.. Right partner? Wow.. Happy to know that.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Leo
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it beautiful Leo.. Happy to hear that from somoeone special like you.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ peachpitproduction
ReplyDeleteGladly... Happy to hear those words from you.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ rashmi
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it... Magic.. Wow.. Happy to hear those words from you rashmi.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
This is wonderful work.. I am flattered by this.. I give you a title, "Romantic Verser"..
ReplyDelete@ bala
ReplyDeleteYou made me fly to Cloud 9..
"Romantic Verser".. Am I? Oh great Thanks for the honor..
--Someone Is Special--
dude, r u writin a book? lemme knw :)
ReplyDelete@ R-A-J
ReplyDeleteHi RAJ.. Welcome back man.. Yeah I was writing a book but due to huge work pressure I stopped in between and the worst is I lost it almost when my system was hacked.. :-(.. Will be writing in near future..
Someone is Special