It is time to party
for trick or treat or for
Halloween or Ghost does
they exists in this earth ?
or doesn't ? Who knows that
life exists after death as
Ghoul or devil or soul?
the dark truth of
life ?
Published as a part of
(Halloween)
One Shot Wendesday @ One Stop Poetry
for trick or treat or for
Halloween or Ghost does
they exists in this earth ?
or doesn't ? Who knows that
life exists after death as
Ghoul or devil or soul?
the dark truth of
life ?
Published as a part of
(Halloween)
One Shot Wendesday @ One Stop Poetry
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nice concrete poem...love teh carving as well..what comes next...we will find out..one day.
ReplyDeleteThe everlasting question of does anything exist after death... be it ghoul or soul?
ReplyDeleteSomething to ponder. Good OS.
ReplyDeleteI like the full effect. The poem the likeness of the carving in the poem
ReplyDeletenicely done One Shot
moon smiles
Interesting questions posed here, SiS... Ironically, we'll never really know the answers in this life... will we? :)
ReplyDeleteIn this life, all we can really do, is Love and Party!!!
I really liked the simplicity and innocence in your poem... made it very real indeed!
Thanks for sharing it with poetry potluck as well...
Ahan nice one ...i like the style u used :)
ReplyDeleteP.S. back to blogging after long so nice to read u again :)
Nice..
ReplyDeleteLovely form... :)
I dig the style, look, and depth of inquiry into life!
ReplyDeletethis poem has layers...
Perfect for potluck and one shot!
http://itslovelyannie.com/2010/11/02/there-is-no-place/
Thanks a ton for linking,
ReplyDeleteyou are so thoughtful....
your entry is perfect fitting our theme.
well done.
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Thanks a lot for the support.
Happy November!
Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!
xxx
A fun (but rather dark) poem -- even shaped like a pumpkin. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteGreat Halloween poetry.. I liked it. The question is what is actually life? Liked the ending..
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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That was very clever to shape your words in the shape of the pumpkin and then the red highlights to mimic the facial features. I really liked that.
ReplyDelete@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteglad you loved it brian.. of course one day we have to.. Thank you so much...
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@ Reflections
ReplyDeleteyes it is.. Thank you so much...
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@ KB
ReplyDeleteyeah yeah.. Thank you so much KB ...
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@ moondustwriter
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it moon.. Thanks for the smiles..
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@ Kavita
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Kavita.. of course it is a puzzle with answer never known though it has.. Thanks for mentionin the simplicity and innocense behind this..
Happy to share it with potluck..
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@ Scribbling Girl
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it nice and like the style.. Good to know that you are back... Have a rocking days..
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@ Sumit Sarkar
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much Sumit...
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@ itslovelyannie.com
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved the style, look and depth of life.. of course it is.. Thank you so much and sure will visit yours too..
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear those ji.. Thanks a lot for liking it and for those encouraging words.. you are a super kind ji..
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@ Jingle Poetry
ReplyDeleteI already wished them in the post ji, sure will visit their blog to shower my presence.. Glad to know that ji.. Thanks a lot ji..
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@ Glynn
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that Glynn .. Thank you so much..
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@ Shashi
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it.. yes it life.. .. Thank you so much..
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@ Tina
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it.. and thanks for liking the style too Thank you so much.
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very well written and such a searching question.....i just hope i am more of a success in the next world...pete
ReplyDelete@ Pete
ReplyDeleteOf course it is such a question and loved the way you responded, thanks Pete..
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Clever use of Hallow's Eve verse & color.
ReplyDelete@ Steve
ReplyDeleteHappy to hear those words.. Thank you so much..
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